Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Writer's WORDshop

I meet twice a month with this fun group of talented women who are trying to become better writers. This next week's lesson (Caryn-Writing the Natural Way, p. 162) is on metaphors in our writing. A metaphor is an image connected to something that literally cannot be. See if you can figure out my metaphor in this free verse. Send me your metaphors and I'll post them or put them in a comment.


What am I?

Wanting to fly freely
Yet grounded by fears
Wary, watchful, wondering
What will happen next

Do I dare venture out
Sitting here on my high perch
Is it safe or will you
Try to capture me

Want me to be your prisoner
Or will you free me to
Fly away to new places
And exciting experiences 

Will we create a nest together
Mate and raise our young ones
Teaching them to fly freely
Of will I just sit here…wanting to fly