New poem techniques

From our workshops a couple of weekends ago, I'm trying a new technique using alliteration of three words followed by a fourth different word. Trying to create diversity in my poetic structure. This poem was inspired by a robin nesting by our bedroom window. My photo is below.

Spring Nest

red robin rests while nesting

notices noises nearby, she freezes

flies frantically far away

waits while warmth returns

time ticks tirelessly daily

intuitive instincts initiate patience

soon survival skills pay off

nature nurtures new growth