Spring Nest
red robin rests while nesting
notices noises nearby, she freezes
flies frantically far away
waits while warmth
returns
time ticks tirelessly daily
intuitive instincts initiate patience
soon survival skills pay off
nature nurtures new growth
You're on to something here, Lin. You did a nice job using the new technique. I like the poem and, the photo is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThat is an interesting poetic exercise. You did very well with it. I can see that being used much more sparingly in other formats.
ReplyDeletethat is amazing What a great technique. Thanks Lin
ReplyDeleteThat is a new technique and I think it came out really well
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